bahir holem

Monday, September 18, 2006

Bahir holem 5

Gharer modhy e ratri neme ashe,
Daoar baire opekkhoman bhor
Chor palalo buddhi gelo bere
Ashtoprohor agle berai dor.

Anweshaner bhan kore rat jage
Prahari mon,Katie ghumghor.
Chokite jol ele chokher kole
Jolchokite ghumie pore chor.

4 Comments:

Blogger Asmi said...

Kobita ti alada kore porle bhalo lagbe. Tobe ager kobita gulor pore porle,mone hobe Lekhika Bhabnar eki aborte ghure cholechhen.
Shekol bhangar nisphol chesta, kokhono kalponaay,kokhono bastobe.
Ghar o bairer chiroton dwando.

Etai swavabik hoyto..tobu..ektu monotonous lagte paare.

10:55 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Boro sundar! Theme oporibortito rekhe shudhu shesh line duto ektu touch korte paren, alliteration erate.Na korleo kichhu noi.

Amar bohu purono ekta kobita mone pore gelo:

"Thou robbest my days of business and delights,
Of sleep thou robbest my nights
Ah, lovely thief,what will thou do?
What?rob me of heaven too?
Even in my prayers, thou hauntest me.
And I, with wild idolatry,
Begin to God, and end them all to thee."
-Abraham Cowley, The Thief

11:55 PM  
Blogger Kausik Das said...

Bahir holem 5 ta bhishon bhalo laglo.
Chhondo ta darun.
Gappo bola tao.

9:53 PM  
Blogger shatarupa said...

Onek dhonnydad.

11:14 PM  

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