bahir holem

Wednesday, September 20, 2006

Bahir holem 6

Lokkho lokkho lokhyobhroshto shel
Kore geche ephor ophor.
Ekta koshto bidhe ache buke,
Tar upor nam lekha tor.

4 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

kichhu kichhu kobita hoi,jekhane bodhhoi jekono manush kothao na kothao nijeke identify korte pare.ei kobita ta seirokom.touching.likhe ja.

3rd line ta konovabe chhondoboddho kora jeto na, na? :-)

9:15 PM  
Blogger Asmi said...

Asambhob bhalo uposthapona.Sahaj satyer apurba prokash.E prosonge Kabiguru-r "Lekhon"er chhoto chhoto kobita gulo mone porchhe.

9:37 PM  
Blogger shatarupa said...

Bhroshto ar koshto te ekta mil rekhechilam.Jani na....Chondo ami chai ekanto bhabe,dukkho ebong dukkho ke otikrom korar joy dutoke eksonge badhte chai.Agony thakbe kintu depression noi.

9:39 PM  
Blogger Kausik Das said...

Soja sapta bala -
Ja bhebechho tai likhechho.

3rd ponkti niye amar o ektu matha byatha aachhe. Palte "Bidhe aachhe ekta kashto buke" bolle ki kaan-e kichhu onyorakom laagchhe.

4th ponkti te "Tar upor namti lekha tor" kore dekhte paro.

Jodio balata ekhon i bhishon bhalo.

10:42 PM  

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