Bahir holem 8
Ditiobar jonmo nie pakhi
Ditiobar morei geli jokhon,
Ditiobar khachar baire eshe
Sunie ja bhaktodaser bhojon.
Pinjorete shunyo pakhir deho,
Pakhi moner khobor jane kojon?
Tilmatro chay na bosotbhumi
Tetul patay bash kore jay nojon.
posted by shatarupa @ 9:11 PM
9 Comments:
Aha!!Abar amar compliment crisis.Any way anobodyo!
Expressione adbhut simplicity,bhab chhondo sob miliye,just kichhu bolar nei!! :)
Pathok nijeke identify korte parle,sekhanei bodh hoy kobitar uttoron.Ei kobitata sedik thekeo sarthok!
lovely! eisob govir concept ki sohoje sere felchho guru,jiyo to!kromosho baul hoye jachchhish je.. ? :-)
shudhu chhondo thik kor,tahole aro sharp hobe.kete jachchhe kothao kothao.
tui chobi likhis jantam, kabyoo je bunis-se to jantam na-khub bhalo laglo tor Bahir holem series. Bahir holem 8-er dwitioyr significance ki? Prothom mrityu kokhon?
Abhishikta
tui chobi likhis jantam, kabyoo je bunis-se to jantam na-khub bhalo laglo tor Bahir holem series. Bahir holem 8-er dwitioyr significance ki? Prothom mrityu kokhon?
Abhishikta
Prothom mrituy khachay bondho hobar somoy.Morar age mora.
Dhonyo ami dhonyo he/baul toder jonno je!
Dujone ki competition diye bhalo likhchho.
E bole amay dekh, aar o bole amai.
Competition to nei.bhalo lekhai ba hochhe koi?Tobe inspiration eto pele kichu hobei mone hochhe.Thanks.
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