Bahir holem 11
Esobi amar chilo
Ar nei bhag hoe geche
Bichhinno ongorajyo
Dhore shire bhinno hoe ache.
Majh juddhe bhongo die
Dui pokkho sondhite meteche.
Juddhobondirao mukto.
Abhisondi gopon roeche.
Ronoshranto rajpothe
Nirbhoe tai bar holam.
Dudhare amar rajjyo
Bibhotsho dwonsher kena golam.
posted by shatarupa @ 1:45 AM
5 Comments:
Advut bhalo!Ei loraitai protiniyoto,chhinnobhinno kore chole.Kothao bhabnar khub kachhakachhi,tobu tor kachh theke uttoron asha kori je,:)thik amonta noy hoyto.Amar ja mone holo tai bollam.:)
"Oi, ja kichhu- buker bhitor alga hoye achhe/Patar fnake uthchhe shamuk,shikor kaate ooi/Amar moton akla manush dukhan hoye shui"..
Ami ektu ghorer modhye likhechi eta.Kub negetive lagche ki?
Negetive holei ba ki?Kobir anubhuti to misro tai na?Kono nirdisto gotipothe take aboddho kora jaay na.
Ar ei ghor to beghor noy,ebhabei Jagoron hobe..hobei.:)
Satyi ki +ve hoi. Amar mone hoi NA. Satyi sabsamay i kotu, kashayo, biporit ebong noirboktik satyakathan baro shakto kaaj. Tabe kono kono jaigai kichhu poribarton kore dekhte parte. Jodi erokom likhte :
Pongkti 4 : "Dhore shire bhinno hoeche"
Pongkti 6 : "Dui pokkho chuktibaddho aaj"
Pongkti 7 : "Juddhabandider mukti, maane"
Pongkti 8 : "Abhisondi gopon rakha kaaj"
Pongkti 10 : "Bahir holem ami, nirbhoy"
Pongkti 12 : "Ghirechhe dhwonsher bibhishikay".
Kemon hoto?
Onek dhnyobad Kausik.
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